Both the first summary and the second summary are different from each other. With the first summary compared to the second summary, the second is a lot longer and more descriptive about the text. the second summary describes the text in a chronological order. In the first summary they talk about how land and the environment shaped the people on the land. In the first summary i think that they could go more in depth of the article. For the second summary we can divide it into 3 paragraphs. For the most part the second summary can go into more detail. These changes in summary A and B could make the text a whole lot better.